Thursday, 13 February 2014

Research & Planning: Small Update to Script

We have changed the following after a discussion with some of our peers:

From:


"Scene 6:

[Chris is on the phone to his best mate, Adam]

Chris: I don't know what to do, they're gonna kill each other!
Ryan: Look mate, you love her
Chris: She's beautiful [shot of Aby with hand stuck in hair] She's smart [shot of Megan burning herself with coffee]She's considerate [shot of Aby not giving up her seat for Megan] She's everything I want [shot of Megan and Aby sat on sofa]
Ryan: [fake vomiting expression] Yeah"

To:


"Scene 6:

[Chris is on the phone to his best mate, Adam]

Chris: I don't know what to do, they're gonna kill each other!
Ryan: Look mate, you love her
Chris: She's beautiful [shot of Aby with hand stuck in hair] She's smart [shot of Megan burning herself with coffee]She's sophisticated [shot of Aby tripping up stairs] She's everything I want [shot of Chris speaking]
Ryan: [fake vomiting expression] Yeah"

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