Thursday, 26 September 2013

Research & Planning: Rough Draft for a Comedy Scene for First Proposal

We have produced a script for a short scene that highlights the comedic ability of our first proposal. This will help us gauge whether we will be able to write comedy.

Characters:

Career driven woman (Protagonist): Lucie
Male intern: Adam

Scene:

[Scene starts in an office hallway, with doors along either side. Lucie is walking through the hallway playing Angry Birds on her iPhone. Adam is backing out of a door into the hallway with a pile of paperwork, struggling to manoeuvre through a door. Lucie walks straight into him, Adam drops the paper in his hand and falls into the wall.]

Lucie: "Oh sorry."

Adam: "It's o...kay"

[Lucie carries on walking as if nothing happened. Adam looks up towards her. As Lucie turns a corner, she glances back at him and lets out a little smile.]

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